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  1. ivor20 says:

    scars run deep below the surface
    like lava runs beneath the earth’s crust
    until the cracks are wide enough
    To let all the rivers flow into the sea

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    1. soiba says:

      That’s the truth running beneath our souls dear Ivor

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  2. dronstadblog says:

    It’s like a warning to control yourself. Very interesting Commander. šŸ˜€

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    1. soiba says:

      Thanks a bunch Commander, glad to hear from you šŸ™‚

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  3. Jokerswild says:

    They say in order to find ourselves, sometimes we must lose ourselves first. Only then are you able to uncover the layers that was buried keeping the real you hidden, sometimes it takes that shovel of aggression to dig deep enough to find that person.

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    1. soiba says:

      That is so true and this is both weird and reality at the same time. Thank you friend, felt glad to hear from you. Stay happy ā¤

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      1. Jokerswild says:

        You said it correctly and I love the way you spoke this, true feeling…..love your words.šŸŒ¹. Smile and be happy also.ā™„ļø

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    1. soiba says:

      Thank you šŸ™‚

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  4. AQUIB says:

    But aisa kyo hua ?

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      1. AQUIB says:

        Ab toh bhool bhi gya main toh choro

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  5. A beautiful Erie with lots of heartfelt meaning when read from beginning to end or end to beginning,ā¤ļø

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    1. soiba says:

      Thank you for your beautiful comment šŸ™‚

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  6. Muntazir says:

    Why don’t you write more often ?

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    1. soiba says:

      I am busy these days due to which my writing capability has also been affected. I wish and hope to get it back real soon šŸ˜¦

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  7. Such a marvellous piece of art.

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    1. soiba says:

      Thank you for liking dear ā¤

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