Pain

This tingling pain

My eyes burn,

It adores my body

Worships my soul

Pain,

Penetrates through my skin

Leaves me punctured,

Fills my days with deadness

Nights with insomnia

Pain,

What a priceless reward

Sometimes a surprise

Lasts forever,

In

My dark memories…

© Soiba

Image: Zaplife

23 Comments Add yours

  1. ivor20 says:

    This is powerfully painful and deeply sad…. well done Soiba…xx

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    1. soiba says:

      It was written in one of those moments dear Ivor, thank you xx

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      1. ivor20 says:

        Yes, I understand those moments……

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  2. ESP says:

    a homage to the tingling pain? Pain does have the side effect of establishing our existence, it makes us conscious of what we really are made of

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    1. soiba says:

      There!
      Another way to look at it. Pain is a part of who we are and I think it’s essential.
      Thank you ESP ❤

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    1. soiba says:

      Thank you for your wonderful comments 🙂

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    1. soiba says:

      Thank you Adi ❤

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  3. Jokerswild says:

    So powerful lovely, and sometimes pain can be such a powerful lesson behind us learning and making us stronger. A prep tool in a sense to show what we are and what we can be. Your words are not only poetic dear, but a learning lesson as well.❤️❤️

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    1. soiba says:

      I realised it after posting the poem dear friend. You’re so right when you say it makes us stronger because it really does and we can’t run away from it. Thank you for your love and support, stay happy always ❤

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      1. Jokerswild says:

        Your words are so true which is why I loved this read lovely, it rang so true and the message is so clear. You too stay happy and positive.❤️🌹

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      2. soiba says:

        Love your words of encouragement, thank you ❤

        Liked by 1 person

  4. Isha says:

    Hi, would love for you to check out my blog and let me know what you think ☺️

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    1. soiba says:

      Sure thank you for visiting and liking Isha 🙂

      Liked by 1 person

  5. Bhagyashree says:

    A hard-hitting poem in moments of raging pain! This is so beautiful and true to the core! Great peice!😊

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    1. soiba says:

      Thank you for your kind words. Stay happy 🙂

      Like

  6. A well-written reality!

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  7. krc says:

    Wellpenned
    👍🖋️

    Liked by 1 person

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