Black Hole

I’ve lost my dreams

Now,

Nightmares make me scream

The path ahead is blurry

You say not to worry

I keep on walking nevertheless

And, vagueness grows with every step

Treading on a forbidden path

That’s leading me down

into the dark abyss,

Sweet Lord,

When would I arise?

© Soiba

34 Comments Add yours

  1. dronstadblog says:

    Kinda grim, kinda alluring. 😀

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    1. soiba says:

      I like your comment 😀
      Good to hear from you Commander

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  2. AQUIB says:

    Nice nice.
    Alarm clock lelo Acha wlaa. ⏰😆

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    1. soiba says:

      Haha but why 😂

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      1. AQUIB says:

        Time pe jago gi. ⌚

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      2. soiba says:

        Yay b sahi ha 😀

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  3. Blessings and light to you Soiba!

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    1. soiba says:

      Thank you always and blessings to you too 🙂

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  4. This is beautiful. I find so much hope in this despair. For I know the LORD will shed light on that darkness, and provide the peace and comfort we need to get back to solid ground 🙂 Just beautiful 🙂

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    1. soiba says:

      You’re so right, LORD helps us find our way always as its these dark moments that make us ponder and get more closer to HIM!
      Thank you dear Margaret, blessings to you 🙂

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      1. yes, yes exactly what you said, “and get more closer to HIM!” Praise God. Isn’t that the times when we are closest to Him, it seems. It should not be so but when we need Him we really, really seek Him out even though He is standing right there ALL the time. I feel, I am talking with Him all day every day as it is. When I am in that abyss, stumbling is when I feel Him the most 🙂 Thank you my friend for your nourishing encouragement.

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      2. soiba says:

        Yes I agree with you HE is always there, only we need to remind ourselves that he’d never leave us alone!
        Thank you dear

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  5. Beautiful 💙💙

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    1. soiba says:

      I’m glad you liked it, thank you 🙂

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    1. soiba says:

      Happens dear we all share feelings here!
      Stay happy ❤

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  6. ESP says:

    There is always a light beyond the black hole of existence, and that light is within?

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    1. soiba says:

      Yes when you try finding it, you realise that it starts from within

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  7. Jokerswild says:

    Always light in the darkness lovely🌹✨💫

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    1. soiba says:

      Hey thanks old friend, good to hear from you ❤

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      1. Jokerswild says:

        So welcome🌹🌹. Good to hear from you too❤️

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  8. gauriwalecha says:

    I can relate! Sometimes, everything seems to be spiralling down to nothing. But I would like to say, just hang in there friend, every thing will turn out to be great!🙂

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    1. soiba says:

      Youre right 🙂
      Thank you for your kind comment, stay blessed!

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      1. gauriwalecha says:

        My pleasure 🙂
        Thank you so much ☺️
        You too😊

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  9. ivor20 says:

    Hi dear Soiba, I’ve just started back blogging and trying to catch up a bit (almost impossible), and I’ve read your insightful poem
    Keep walking my friend,
    Our journey has twists and bends
    There’s a beginning and an end
    There’s a reason to what God sends

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    1. soiba says:

      Hello dear Ivor, I am also trying to be back here but it’s still taking time. It feels so wonderful to hear from you. Thank you for your amazing comment, stay happy and blessed xx

      Like

      1. ivor20 says:

        I shall always be wirh you Soiba 😉💜

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  10. Muntazir says:

    Very Beautifully penned

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    1. soiba says:

      Thank you Muntazir, stay blessed

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  11. iScriblr says:

    Beautiful and relatable!❤️

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    1. soiba says:

      Thank you dear xx

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  12. lorriebowden says:

    Sending blessings of love and light ❤

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    1. soiba says:

      Thank you dear, blessings to you xx

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