Oh mother…
I stepped out
of my shell
Now this world
is my cell,
I see faces;
Ravenous,
Coming for me
Ah!
Where do I flee?
Oh mother…
Where have you been?
See,
They’ve been waiting for me
Today,
I’m their key!
Alas!
Can’t trace my steps back,
The path’s full of cracks
Oh mother…
Come save me,
I only trust thee!
© Soiba
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Beautifully said Soiba, Oh, I’ve cried these words so many times
“Oh mother…
Come save me,
I only trust thee!”
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You can very well relate then 🙂
Thank you for appreciation dear Ivor xx
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Yes dear Soiba, I know the feelings. 😊
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I can only trust thee, mother! So true 💖
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Yes I think it’s the only truth!
Thank you for liking Radhika, stay blessed
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Very very well written Soiba!
Keep Writing and Keep Shining ✨
Best Wishes
Amrita 💕
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Thank you Amrita for liking and dropping your comment, stay happy and blessed 🙂
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Beautiful ❤
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Thank you for liking and dropping your comment, stay happy 🙂
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This was wonderfully beautiful lovely. I love how you noted stepping out of a shell and into a cell, the world is our prison metaphor. There’s nothing safer than a mothers love.🌹
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Yes I agree with you 100 percent, thank you always for understanding the verses so beautifully, love your comments 🙂
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You are so so welcome, it’s my pleasure lovely. Love your post🌹🌹😊
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A beautiful lesson!
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Thank you for your comment, stay blessed and happy!
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🙂
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So. Sad!!
Hope. It. Is not true. Sister
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Thank you so much for sticking by me sister!
Love xx
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😞
Well…. if you need anything, you know where to find me 😉
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That I know 🙂
Stay blessed and happy dear sister ❤
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Thank you
God bless you too.
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Let’s be free! Beautifully written.
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Thank you for your wonderful comment 🙂
Wishes and blessings!
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I like your poem
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Thank you for liking dear, stay happy.
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Nice loving and passionate one Soiba
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Thank you for liking and your support dear Kurian, stay blessed 🙂
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You are most welcome Soiba. I will be looking forward to following you
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This is wonderful Soiba 🙂 I keep following you but wordpress keeps dropping you off my list. So, if you see me “follow” you every so often this is why. It’s not just you it does this with, it does it with any blog I follow. It’s done this to me ever since I started the blog. I don’t know why and WP doesn’t have an answer either. I pray your weekend is full of blessings 🙂
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I understand it has happened to me quite often too so no worries dear Margaret 🙂
Thank you for your wonderful support and prayers, wishes and blessings to you xx
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It is indeed a scary world out there. A heartfelt piece.
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Thank you for getting it and your wonderful comment, peace.
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You’re welcome, Soiba.
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its a scary world indeed, but there is hope and you might indeed be the key to that
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You’re right, hope is the only hope 🙂
Thank you for your thoughts, stay happy
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Beautiful poem soiba
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Thank you for liking dear, stay blessed
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Just so wonderfully expressed the pains that we all face stepping out in this world… Just beautiful 👌👌
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Thank you so much and reading and dropping your beautiful thoughts, stay blessed 🙂
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You are welcome dear ❤️❤️
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