Control

These dodgy times

when insanity rules over

my perception,

All of my rational ticks

get

rebellious at once!

 

But,

When everything’s about you;

I feel splinters inside of me,

Shards of inanity,

Flying away from each other

In every possible direction!

 

Darling,

I’m never a step ahead

It’s you who controls my mind!

 

© Soiba

Image: Wiki

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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46 Comments Add yours

  1. Novus Lectio says:

    Cool!!!
    I wish you wrote more often

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    1. soiba says:

      Yep I’m trying to gain momentum sis, thank you for your kindness ❤

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  2. ivor20 says:

    Hi Soiba, it’s good to be reading a poem of yours. You’ve been so supportive reading all my words. I feel there is a lot more behind your words here, deep underlying emotions, but I might be wrong. 😊

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    1. soiba says:

      Dear Ivor, thank you for your kind words and support. You felt right, there’s a lot behind these words as they were written in a profound state but I felt so good to share it here, I really missed blogging!

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      1. ivor20 says:

        I’m pleased you’re able to do some writing again, I shall look for you in my reader xx

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      2. soiba says:

        Oh that’s sweet 🙂
        Love and blessings to you xx

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  3. ESP says:

    ah finally something from the not at all inane mind of Soiba, wonder who controls it though…

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    1. soiba says:

      Haha you made me laugh ESP 😀
      Thank you for your friendship and support, I’m blessed!

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    1. soiba says:

      Thank you for reading and liking dearest, stay blessed!

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  4. ellie894 says:

    It’s so good to see you writing Soiba. Such a strength and depth to it. Missed you, suzanne❤️

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    1. soiba says:

      Thank you so much for your love and continuous support dearest, I missed writing too 🙂
      Much love xx

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  5. magarisa says:

    A powerful description of one’s battle against oneself.

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    1. soiba says:

      Thank you always for your wonderful comments dear Mags, stay blessed xx

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      1. magarisa says:

        My pleasure, Soiba. 💜

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  6. Kurian says:

    Beautiful and very passionate Soiba

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    1. soiba says:

      Thank you for such an encouraging comment dear Kurian, stay happy and blessed 🙂

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      1. Kurian says:

        You are most welcome Soiba. Take care

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    1. soiba says:

      Thank you for your support and love, stay happy 🙂

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    1. soiba says:

      Thank you for your wonderful comment, stay happy 🙂

      Like

  7. AQUIB says:

    Hello, nice to read, so beautiful it is.
    Control, hmmm. 😁😁.

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    1. AQUIB says:

      Wish you more power to your pen. God bless you.

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      1. soiba says:

        Thank you Aquib Jazak Allah khair, keep praying and you too stay blessed 🙂

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  8. Jokerswild says:

    Obsession and possession over the mind makes the soul played and the body a puppet. That’s the way love goes😁. What a powerful write lovely, missed your artistic mind. This was compelling indeed.🌹🌹

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    1. soiba says:

      Strong and powerful motivation from your side as always dear 🙂
      You explained it wonderfully, I’m glad you got it so beautifully, thank you for liking and making me feel awesome, blessings to you 🙂

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      1. Jokerswild says:

        I should thank you lovely, your writing is a treat to read and special indeed.😊
        You wrote this with such feeling, it was so impossible not to feel it❤️. I loved this post and you are awesome doll.🌹

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      2. soiba says:

        Oh thank you so very much dear Jo for your lovely comments 🙂
        Stay blessed and happy!

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      3. Jokerswild says:

        It’s my pleasure lovely, you deserve the comments I give❤️🌹.
        😊. Stay well.🌹

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  9. iScriblr says:

    Beautifully penned! Glad to have you back!❤

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    1. soiba says:

      Thank you for your kind words, stay happy and blessed ❤

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  10. ckennedyhola says:

    Very powerful! Well done!

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    1. soiba says:

      Thank you for liking and dropping your comment, stay happy and blessed 🙂

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  11. I hope you are well Soiba didi…. Missed you

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    1. soiba says:

      I’m perfectly fine little sister, love xx

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      1. That’s great 💜💜

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  12. Beautiful expressions thank you for always reading my posts its so lovely to have your support

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    1. soiba says:

      You’re welcome dear and thank you for your nice comment, stay happy 🙂

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      1. You are so sweet 😘😘

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    1. soiba says:

      Thank you 🙂

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