Cruel Love

She always kept her promises

Thought they were sacred

But broke the ones,

She made to herself!

People thought she was strong

Only she knew how weak she was

She knew how to defend herself

But she never protected herself

So she could give it another chance

But it was so cruel…

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22 Comments Add yours

  1. aquibview says:

    Oh nicely penned Down soiba, that’s emotional.. Friend. . ☺️☺️☺️

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    1. soiba says:

      Thank you Aquib…Glad you liked it 🙂

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      1. aquibview says:

        ☺️☺️☺️

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  2. myfailurestep, Education says:

    the poems you write on Love are selfless

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    1. soiba says:

      thanks for a sweet comment 🙂

      Liked by 2 people

      1. myfailurestep, Education says:

        You are Welcome!

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  3. Very nice poem! Love it!

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    1. soiba says:

      thanks 🙂 🙂

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  4. ivors20 says:

    Oh, to relinquish and review those broken promises we make to ourselves…..

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    1. soiba says:

      lovely explanation!

      Like

    1. soiba says:

      thank you for liking it 🙂

      Liked by 1 person

  5. Hit me right in the heart … wow.
    Abby | http://www.seafoaming.com

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    1. soiba says:

      so glad you liked it 🙂 Thanks for stopping by 🙂

      Like

  6. jade0207 says:

    This captures a point of my life so well. If you are in this place then I just assure you giving the wrong people too many chances won’t make them right. Nice and raw poem 💖

    Liked by 1 person

    1. soiba says:

      i totally agree with you 🙂
      thank you for a lovely comment 🙂

      Like

      1. jade0207 says:

        You’re welcome 🙂 💜

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  7. Kurian says:

    Beautiful
    Stay strong and you will be triumphant
    All the best

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    1. soiba says:

      thank you 🙂

      Liked by 1 person

  8. Jokerswild says:

    We’re usually the hardest on ourselves. A beautiful look on the inside of the human soul on how some look at love. 🌹🌹

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    1. soiba says:

      That’s humble of you to say, thanks 🙂

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Jokerswild says:

        You’re welcome. 🌹🙂

        Liked by 1 person

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