Passive

Such an imbecile!

Knowing you take me

For granted,

Knowing you know I’ll be there

Nonetheless,

I iterate my actions!

You shouldn’t be blamed,

The blame is on me!

Perhaps I’d never learn…

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29 Comments Add yours

  1. myfailurestep,Education says:

    Wow! so much has been conveyed in so little words, speechless

    Liked by 1 person

    1. soiba says:

      Thank you for the appreciation 🙂

      Liked by 1 person

  2. Aquileana says:

    I can (totally) relate … Sigh…. You should listen to Lana del Rey´s song Cherry (on Spotify, still not on Youtube) 😀 xx

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    1. soiba says:

      Thank you so much ❤
      Sure will 🙂

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    1. soiba says:

      Thanks, glad you liked it 🙂 🙂

      Like

  3. ivors20 says:

    A very concise and poignant poem, the “Violin Strings” are breaking.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. soiba says:

      yes and when they’re done breaking, there’s no mending!
      thanks 🙂

      Like

  4. Kurian says:

    You are too good. There’s no blame
    Thanks for the nice post

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    1. soiba says:

      yes i think the passive personality has to suffer no matter what…
      Thanks for your sweet comment 🙂

      Like

  5. A pleasure to read.

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  6. Well done. Everyone makes mistakes and we have to accept consequences, but can we avoid of making mistakes?
    Take care.

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    1. soiba says:

      right the avoidance is tricky.
      Thank you for liking it 🙂

      Like

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    1. soiba says:

      Thank you for the nomination, i’ll check it out 🙂

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Sure do message me

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  8. aquibview says:

    Such a great poem soiba, the kindness and sweetness of yours appears in your poem.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. soiba says:

      thank you for a humble comment 🙂

      Like

      1. aquibview says:

        My pleasure(urdu me kaise bolte h, I know but I am forgetting)

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      2. soiba says:

        main khush qismat hoon / shukria / jazak Allah
        sb acceptable hain lol

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      3. aquibview says:

        JazakAllah khair. Good night.

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    1. soiba says:

      it sure is
      thanks for reading 🙂

      Like

  9. Sometimes the worse hurt is when you realize you’ve stayed too long

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    1. soiba says:

      Agreed!
      Thank you for your wonderful comment, blessings 🙂

      Like

  10. yuulye says:

    Why the title, Passive?

    Liked by 1 person

    1. soiba says:

      Passive here means “A passive personality” 🙂

      Liked by 1 person

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