Severed

The dreams she had were innocent and powerful,

He crushed her dreams before they became vivid

She expected extraordinary from him,

He displayed its opposite

She wanted to express herself,

He never listened

She worked hard to make him proud,

He demeaned her

She never believed in failure,

He was the one behind her failures

She adored him,

He forgot he was designed to love her…

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15 Comments Add yours

  1. Jade Hall says:

    Painful to read but thank you for sharing

    Liked by 1 person

    1. soiba says:

      Thank you Jade πŸ™‚

      Liked by 1 person

  2. ivors20 says:

    So hope she left him, not a nice man, this is a very good read, well done.

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  3. soiba says:

    Glad you found it good to read
    thanks πŸ™‚

    Like

  4. msarora says:

    He wasn’t meant for her…..she deserves better.nice poem….

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    1. soiba says:

      Thank you for liking it πŸ™‚

      Like

  5. Jeni G.J says:

    Another beautiful short tale..love your style of writing.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. soiba says:

      Thank you so much Jeni πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

      Like

  6. Nice poem… Your style of writing is really beautiful

    Liked by 1 person

    1. soiba says:

      Thank you so much πŸ™‚ I am glad you liked it πŸ™‚

      Liked by 1 person

      1. WelcomeπŸ˜„βœŒ

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  7. That last line is incredible such power

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    1. soiba says:

      Thank you for your wonderful comment πŸ™‚
      Peace

      Like

  8. Sounds like my father.

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